Save me

Will someone help me?

Can anyone save me?

I have been like this for over two years

I'm sick and tired of it

I hate the way I am living

I hate the way I treat the people around me

I want to change

I really do

Can anyone be my savior?

Please save me...from the darkness inside of me...

Everytime it comes out of me...I lose more people I love...

I wasn't always like this...but after I lost the one person I loved...

I have completely changed...from happiness...to sadness and hatred...

There are certain times where I don't want to be around anymore...

That I should just end it here and now...I can't take it anymore...

So I ask again...someone save me...from the darkness inside of me...I'm begging you..

Save me...before its too late...

Reviews

[WiLL i e]

People want two things above all. To be loved, and more, to be understood. If only others understood us like we understand ourselves. What a world. But the truth is that although our stories differ, we all have the same wants and needs. So I think it follows we have the same cuts and hurts. Plus- since I believe in the creation account of man, which means I believe we all come from the dust of the earth, when I look at my own wants and needs, then think of my own cuts and hurts, I can look just a little beneath the surface and it's there I can understand others, for at their core they're much like me. We're all born of the same filth and depravity. Here's the thing: when two people break up, and they sort out the things that matter and those which don't....in the final analysis they will always find two people who just weren't meant to be together. And that is nobody's fault. It just is. You don't point fingers and blame. You just let go and live well. Take your time. Get to know the other person. Take your time....and above all keep an open heart Becky. For from it flows the well spring to life....and Salvation.

[Yari Garcia (Older Prof..]

It was a good poem, but I must add that there's a lot similar on this website. While it was very good, it didn't quite stand out. I hope this doesn't offend you, it is just my opinion.

[just is]

You have to save yourself, no one can do it for you hun.
This is such an emotional write.

[Marie]

Nobody's going to save you. You have to save yourself. People need to learn this early on. There's only you.

You hate the way you treat people but you want them to save you? Why would they do that when you treat them poorly? What do you want someone to do for you? Why should they be responsible for you? Do you have anything to give in return? If no one comes along to pick yourself up for you, will you just sit there in your funk forever? You may have to give a little to get it.

[Forevermore]

a beautiful cry for help i see, i love it, so much feeling, so many truths and lots of organizing must have been done to this. awesome write

[rjrodriguez]

it says a story by becky clancy. isn't this a poem?

[WiLL i e]

And by the way....keep up the good work....I do love your writings

[dreaming dame]

POwerful, beautiful and artistic. I know how this feels... Nice write:)

[Eagle Cruagh]

Saving a person is inappropriate behavior.
We should all be willing to help when it is
needed. So, go to anyone of the members
of Writers Cafe and they should advise you,
help you with any problem.
You are an excellent writer. Try to see more
pleasantness in your surroundings and remember.

---- in your mind you create the world.... Buddah

----- John