My Heart

Yes it gives me life

Yes it keeps me breathing

But it still yearns for something...

What could it be?

Is it blood? No

Is it air? No

Is it beating right? Yes

But what could be missing?

What is it?

Oh wait...I remember now...

It yearns for love...

It yearns for happiess...

Two of those things in which I have yet to have...

Can someone help me with it?

Can somone give me love and happiness?
That I highly doubt...

My heart hurts so much...

I need love...

I need happiness...

My heart wants those things...

Its the only way to save my heart from darkness...

Save me...

Save my heart...

Reviews

[SilentDreamer]

I like it. Good end line- I think the end line is usually what makes or breaks a poem for me. If it doesn't end well it doesn't sound good. But this worked out well! I think a lot of people could actually relate to this, myself included. A dark poem but I'm sure you will find love and happiness. Great write!:)

[Coyote Poetry]

All of us desire a place where we know peace and happiness. Love and a relationship can be a two-sided coin. Can cause pleasure or pain. Happiness come from doing what you desire and what we want. Don't underestimate freedom to travel and learn. I like the desire of this poem. A strong ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Rupam SK]

You have articulated the condition of modern man. Yes, I felt depressed after reading your poem! The yearning for abstracts is the common denominator that has stayed with man through the ages.

[Starcaller]

lol np...I think it interesting how you ask questions about it first :3 overall very cool poem XD