Alone...

Alone...

A Poem by Becky Clancy

The worst feeling to have...

No one there for you...

No family...no friends...

Just you...and you alone...

Yes I do have a family...

But I feel like I don't have a family...

No one gives a damn about me...

Thats fine with me...

I don't care anymore...

F**k you and everyone else...

I'm better off alone...

Thats that...

I'll be...forever alone...

© 2012 Becky Clancy


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I like being alone till my poor wife found me. I roamed for 35 years alone. Today I have four kids and grand kids running through the house. I'm glad someone thought I was worthwhile. The poem is direct and honest. Hard to fight a world alone. Need someone to believe in your life and deeds. A excellent poem. You are a very good writer. You can express yourself and know how to create emotion and sadness with your poetry. Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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Short and sweet, dark but poetic. No complaints from me.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like this very much. I can relate to this in a way. Short, but powerful nonetheless!

Posted 12 Years Ago


It's easy to feel a sense of utter isolation, you've kept this piece as simple as possible, and you show very well an aggresive reaction to feeling alone

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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I can relate a great deal to this. I felt that way a while back. As for this piece of writing, it was very well written and the word choice was good. The poem seems personal which is a good thing in a way. Overall, it was very well done.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sad :'( and very realistic... I very much liked this one XD

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was an excellent write. I could relate. I feel like that as well. I think everyone could relate to this. It's hard to be alone eventually though. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like being alone till my poor wife found me. I roamed for 35 years alone. Today I have four kids and grand kids running through the house. I'm glad someone thought I was worthwhile. The poem is direct and honest. Hard to fight a world alone. Need someone to believe in your life and deeds. A excellent poem. You are a very good writer. You can express yourself and know how to create emotion and sadness with your poetry. Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

simple yet excellent :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I know this one is kinda short, Sorry about that :(

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Becky Clancy

Viroqua, WI



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Hello, My name is Rebecca Clancy (But everyone calls me Becky), I'm new around here so I would LOVE to have some help around here, you know, show me around (: My Greatest passion is music so I'm hopin.. more..

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