What a fool I was

When I first met you, I thought you were the sweetest most caring guy Ive ever met
When you asked me to go out with you, I was so happy.
All those times we spent together were the best days of my life
I really thought you were the one for me
You told me that you wanted to be with me for the rest of your life
You told me that you wanted to start a family with me when I was ready to have kids
You told me that I was your entire world and that you would NEVER hurt me

But you know what you did to me?
You hurt me...In more ways than one
You stopped seeing me
You stopped calling me
You stopped texting me
It was like you disappeared off the face of the Earth

Ive tried talking to you, No response
Ive tried calling you, All I got was your voicemail
But the day that I actually got to talk to you
You betrayed me
You betrayed me by sleeping with a different girl and getting her pregnant
You decided to leave me for her

You broke my heart
And I dont think you even care that you hurt me
Your with someone else
And what do I have?
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A shattered heart...

Reviews

[FelicityAllona]

"Sometimes you have to forget what you feel and remember what you deserved."

This broke my heart. None of us deserved a shattered heart but those painful experiences will make open your eyes. He doesn't deserved you, there are guys better for you. I only wish the best of luck for you. You will meet him soon in the most unexpected times and unexpected place.

*The piece on the other hand was written in good form and it exposed what is in your heart thus, a heart felt poem. :) Great job!

[koty bell]

The guys a f*****g idiot...just my opinion this write was amazing relatable,well written descriptive. And awe inspiring.great work!!!:)

[Rachelle]

Use this for lyrics in a song! Perfect theme. Have you ever tried composing?
Forget the guy, though... Work on your gifts....

[Alex Vidmar]

So sad. Goes well for either gender.

[Sami Khalil]

A sad but relevant poem to so many people...Splendid...:)

[MandaBear]

Awww I wish I could give you a hug! Well I can tell you that he is missing out on the awesome person you are and you will find someone better than him. I can't say I have ever had been in this situation because I have not ever had a relationship but I know I would been just as hurt as you were. I hope everything happy for you! Great write though! You really know how to pull at the heart strings =)

[stars are far]

ouch ...I can relate to this so mcuh... and after all i realized that trusting a guy is a foolish idea ..they are always lying ...Mine didnt sleep with a girl yet but all of other stuff like describing now :(
It is hurtful...but ...He isnt the best after all..
thanks for describing me ...

[Coyote Poetry]

No cure for a heartache but time. A sad poem. Love can lead us to good places and turn against us. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Emerald Seas]

Some people are callous and hurtful. You express the pain and anguish well. Betrayal of trust, lies told without care, it is a character flaw found sometimes in those we wouldn't fathom had it in them to behave so terribly. Nicely penned.