whimpering

whimpering
like a sad puppy
lost and alone wonder
if someone will fing me
and take me home
whimpering
like the puppy because
i'm sick and cold
looking for some place
warm to go
whimpering
like that puppy wondering
how long will it take
for someone to notice
i'm gone
giving out one last whimper
like the puppy did
hoping that somebody notice
me before
i hit the floor dead
with one last
whimper

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another sad write...I been reading so many sad ones tonight..i think the cafe's in a bad mood..gr8 write