Perspective

As the reasons spin around me
They kick up a violent storm
Voices whisper in the roaring wind
Fall into the void now formed

Feeling the walls around me close
Seeing my future as dark as ink
Knowing that soon the ones i love
Will push me too and beyond the brink

Life slips through my hands like smoke
And still i cant shake it away
Taking poisons to heal no pain
Tearing flesh till its all ok
 

Reviews

[Kira]

I think titles are great hooks, but sometimes it really annoys me if they don't have anything to do with the context. I think it COULD have something to do with it, but I'm lost.

(Yes, the poem was great, but I'm concentrating on how this could be a matter of perspective...severely irritating me...)