broken

I am lost in my tears
Asorbed in my hate
Forced to face my fears
You were too late.

I can't see straight anymore
I am falling off the track
What am I fighting for?
I'm beginning to crack

If you would look at me
It would become plain
Are you too blind to see?
That I am in pain.

I feel it building
I'm beginning to fall
I'm on my knees pleading
I can't take it all.

Now you ignore me.
and I feel myself break
Please listen carefully.
This is more than I can take.

Reviews

[Jessica]

This is one of my favorite poems i have read on this website! It shows much emotion and portrays it clearly. It was easy to read and easy to understand! Outstanding JOB!

[Ian]

I really like this... no... I think I love it XD... it's pretty dark and tragic... just the way I like the most
I can feel a lot of pain in this... when you need someone to listen to you and you're all alone or nobody is willing to listen... it's awful... Wonderful piece!