A wave to rule them all

Talks about love, how in an ocean of emotions love is the biggest wave there is, and it seems to have the strongest effect on us than any other emotion.

I'd like to surf through the waves of your curly hair,

I'd like to swim in the ocean that we've created by ourselves

Each droplet is a tear, we cried in happy and bitter moments.

So don't cry me a river, cry me a ocean.

And if perhaps I drown in this ocean,

Death would be just a tale,

A mere scar in the skin of mine.

Author's Note

"Ocean" in the text refers to their relationship/love story in general.

Reviews

[Boring~Potato]

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[SleeplessVolcano]

Very eloquent poetry. I like the free flowing style, reminiscent of the same waves of the ocean, though not limited by precision.....just like the ocean and our poetry....:)