Writer's block.

This is for anyone who has writer's block, and feels they are alone.

Wrong, wrong, wrong every word made to

Resemble my thoughts and dreams, but even

I can see it needs to be better! I see the

Theme and the plot. I hear the words and

Emphasize the scene again. Rewriting my

Run-though, over and over again. Every

Slur is wrong. I grab my pen and scream

 

Bogus! My nerves are stoned, my eyes are

Leery. My mind is lost in train of thought

Obstacle. I see it all so plain in my mind

Consecutive. Every thing I see I hope to

Keen my wit, so I can just write my block.

Reviews

[Aimee Mahathy]

XD wow! This is so spot on! I get the same feeling when I want to draw something- then remember that I don't know how to draw. u.u But it's worse with writing, because we know we CAN write... our hands just aren't cooperating. And then, when you're mentally reorganizing your thoughts you get lost in the confusion and it's all chaos from there.
I can so see this happening, like in a movie.
Great job!

[Richard Williams]

Sharp and direct, as if you have broken those blocked stones with the chiseled will of your intent.

[Alexanne Dauntless]

Once again: love the style. Sometimes even writer's block can be a form of inspiration. =]] You have portrayed a feeling I think most of us on this site can relate to.

[Calypso]

Very good.
Sometimes I wish there was a pill I could take for writer's block

[Ice Queen of the Vampir..]

I know exactly how you feel. I've been blocked for so long it's driving me crazy. This is an awesome write and wonderfully done.

[Laha]

...i know, it's like you have to much to say but you have been silenced. Pure agony.

[Robin]

when the muse leaves you write about it ~ I like this

[Brad]

oh shyte, i always imagine what a write will be when i start and it either ends up completely wrong and sometimes i get something absolutely beautiful...like roulette

[smalltownsympathies]

Love how I read it as a complete jumble of words and mystery. Great piece, short, and sweet.

[MissWordSmith]

Ah, I know what you mean! You describe this so perfectly!!
I like the phrase "So i can write my block"

[HorrorMaster]

very true