vous celui j'aime

Et donc vous essayez de nouveau, bien que votre-vie soit maintenant le péché.

Mon coeur qu'il casse et vous il prend.

Nous avons essayé de vivre, mais nous maintenant nous ne gagnerons pas.

L'amour donné à moi, a valu plus alors elle.

Je vous aime cher et maintenant j'attends, Car dans cela je constate que je suis en retard.

Vous l'enfer il brûle, maintenant mon amour yerns.

Il vous a donné que l'anneau, Mais maintenant vous vous jetez.

Mon amour pour vous ne pouvait pas durer, maintenant avec lui de mon passé.

Car dans ce monde, je ne gagnerai jamais.

Ce que je sais, pour cela est mon péché.

Mon coeur doth chacun, pour vous je le sais se cassera.

 

Reviews

[Katseye]

Do you have this in translation? I can't read French.

[BThomvanWart]

While my grasp of French is very limited, from what I could make out it does sound rather poetic, but then again, it's a romantic language so whether you're saying something meaningful or not, it's going to sound romantic and lovely. I only ask because of reading through it, but did you use a translator for this? Or did you write it yourself in French? I would say there may be somethings that seem grammatically incorrect, but like I've said earlier, my knowledge is limited so I am totally willing to admit that I'm wrong. I'm just curious!

[Dr. S. D. Blankenship DDiv., PhD., MA.]

I speak what is known as " French-based creole language". I was born in The USA I have Suak, Tsalagi, German, Irish, French, and English ancestors. And as of which I tend to speak using my own lingo's. It helps.

~S. D. Blankenship

[wordman]

it sounded lovely,a love poem

[horizon]

sorry i don't understand this language...

[Ice QueenJen]

I don't read this language, but I am sure it was good.

[deeps]

I can't really read this one. But i am sure it is good all your stuff is

[Eden]

Magnifique

[~LeeAnn~]

Marvelous....

[Rhine Wolf]

such a pity that i can read, French is it?, from the comments that i have read, it must a very good poem.

Blessed be,
Fallon