Loneliness

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

  

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Love that is very often found,

Only by those that know love

Never see love the way it was

En-tended to be. I do so hope

Love finds each of us, but

I know that this thing shall

Never happen to us the ones

Everyone laughs amongst

So I say to you friend do not

Say you love me, if not.

 

Reviews

[Samm]

And yet again, another very fine poem, how is it you can write so well. I really must know. I love this one just as much as the others. Loneliness should never be taken lightly. and if anyone thanks other wise I will be knocking on their door ASAP I am ready for battle you know? I really do want to know the secret to your writing. Its just so vivid and alive I feel as though I was actually talking to a lonely man, your not are you? I read the poem about the girl I liked it.


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[deeps]

This is amazing! I like the emotions in this one.

[Ashley.M.E]

I like this poem, it is right one... Love is a word that has so many meanings now, and so easy to use to trick others... Nice poem.

[KAREN]

Wanting love thats not to be! Deep!

[.Bunnie.]

Hmm I think it was cute and served a good purpose...sometimes it IS a wee bit too easy for someone to spout those three little words when they don't truly mean them. I guess my only puzzlement was "En-tended"....?? I'm almost willing to bet that you have some underlying meaning for spelling it that way and adding the lil dash in there, but...I don't get it? I don't see it? "Intended." I don't know. I just wanted to point that out, because it's a lil confusing. Other than that, great job! :)

[Bud]

Love and loneliness are very serious issues...never to be taken lightly. This is an excellent write.