Damned to sin

Damned to sin was my idea, however I would like to think Dr. Rick Puetter, for helping me with the story line and choice of words. ~S. D. Blankenship

I wrote this for you the one I knew,

but now I'm Damned from you too.

And now true love is lost with pain,
Damned am I and she is my bane.

You left me for someone that's new,
Damned am I, my dreams I eschew.

We loved this way every day,
Damned am I, loves most feeble prey! 

You laughed as you ripped out my heart,
Damned am I now that we're apart.

You are impaired most fleshly lust,
Damned am I, my passion now rust. 
 
I loved you and only you alone,
Damned am I and bereft my throne.  

For you alone my heart doth ache,
Damned am I, how my world doth shake. 

I miss her smile, her lips, and eyes so blue,
Damned am I that her love was not so true. 

I have great pain while she is well,
I know I'm damned, my life is Hell.

Author's Note

Reviews

[Tai Chi Italy]

Ah I see a love issue approaching.....the reason you feel like this, is precisely because you feel and that is the key to being human imo. We have to take the rough with the smooth on our journey, sometimes it is hell on earth and then again sometimes it is pure bliss, an emotion I am wiling take the pain to have again and again....Luck in love to you, Tai

[Panda]

I really enjoyed reading this poem. They way it is written and the style is great.

Losing a lover, so dear to your heart, makes you feel damned to hell. But you are not the one to blame, her lost, your gain.

Loved how you related love/hell it is a great relation, and very close alike ;).

Great job!

Oh and thanks for joining my group, I featured this poem there :).

[Disco writer]

very sad write my friend, love the dark evil mood you have set unto us with this writing and I hope you well, another good write.

[Jason Henry]

your repetition was perfect...it really makes your poem stand out from the many others which share the topic your using...

[folgers coffee]

Very good write, it seems to me from what I have read your mood seems to change an aful lot. But thats OK you wouldn't be such a wonderful writer if it didn't. :)

[Love is forever]

Damned You are, it seems. I can not tell you as to how sorry a Princess like me feels for a pore soul like you. I enjoyed reading this I like the rhyme. nice fairy tail

[Kenny Malloy]

wow, good work!

will you pleese read my poem, "beautiful" and tell me what you think?
I wish I could write like you...
thank you
Kenny

[Senzieser]

WOW, very touching. I love it! bye

[Burr the Story Sorceres..]

This is a wonderfully written piece. I really love it.
I really don't like her. She is too cruel to laugh at your love.
I congratulate you, my friend. You have a wonderful poem here.

[DRIVEN]

Great expression here, losing, lost in love. We all go through this painful experience of being the one not able to move on, feeling like hell. Time is the only healer. Is the lesson learned ever worth the price of the pain?? Most times.

[Mysty Rayn]

Well, what can I say? You write so well, and this is another example. I just wanted to reach in and comfort you.