Damned to sin

Damned to sin was my idea, however I would like to think Dr. Rick Puetter, for helping me with the story line and choice of words. ~S. D. Blankenship

I wrote this for you the one I knew,

but now I'm Damned from you too.

And now true love is lost with pain,
Damned am I and she is my bane.

You left me for someone that's new,
Damned am I, my dreams I eschew.

We loved this way every day,
Damned am I, loves most feeble prey! 

You laughed as you ripped out my heart,
Damned am I now that we're apart.

You are impaired most fleshly lust,
Damned am I, my passion now rust. 
 
I loved you and only you alone,
Damned am I and bereft my throne.  

For you alone my heart doth ache,
Damned am I, how my world doth shake. 

I miss her smile, her lips, and eyes so blue,
Damned am I that her love was not so true. 

I have great pain while she is well,
I know I'm damned, my life is Hell.

Author's Note

Reviews

[Tai Chi Italy]

Ah I see a love issue approaching.....the reason you feel like this, is precisely because you feel and that is the key to being human imo. We have to take the rough with the smooth on our journey, sometimes it is hell on earth and then again sometimes it is pure bliss, an emotion I am wiling take the pain to have again and again....Luck in love to you, Tai

[Escape My Fate]

Powerful Such sadness. my favorite line was "And now true love is lost with pain," this was the line that was most powerful to me. Great job

[Calypso]

Impressive.

[Art Sun]

Somewhere someone is going through the same emotions...life at times deals the cards of separation and then all that is left is pain...

nice work...

[sarah]

The poem is great the flow was great and the vid was amazing great work!

[Blossom]

this is beautiful in a haunting kind of way.

[Katie Lynn]

This is a very lovely write. It's very sad, and just reading it made my own heart ache a little! I'm very impressed by the rhythm and flow, as well as, well, the poem as a whole! Very well done, great job. ~~Katie Lynn

[George Love]

It's always a hard recovery when you feel you had more invested in the other person than they had in you. Well done

[Stef Outsiders]

I feel you in this one... great piece!!

[Brad]

damn, son, you've got the Hank Sr. down...loved this song...glad it came with audio video

[Ruth]

And its a hard one to battle through isn't it love? I really feel this poem hon! Your heart literally bleeds in each line!
xx