Stolen Emotion

What have you done to me?

A smothering indistinctness of betrayal as memories, bleed once we experienced innocence, & open untainted but your love drifted away, a hateful vision of memory.
Drops of blood follow darkness follow, love burnt to ashes in a burst of sorrow,
I condemn you.

Author's Note

if you trust somebody enough to tell them every thing, make sure that they got your back forever... not just till one grade is over.

Reviews

[Lydia Blackwell]

aww... I know what that is like- don't blame yourself, though- sometimes you can not have anyway of knowing who the good ones are. Nice poem. I enjoyed it, but I would have organized it a bit differently into stanzas and that would probably make it easier to read. write how you want it to be read.

[Raaga]

nicely written. The intensity of the emotions is well sustained throughout. And it is also something every person can relate too. Than every thing I liked the title."Stolen Emotions" - biggest theft of all!

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WOW this is powerful and so well stated!