Aveline

 

           Aveline

you took a beating now you spend your life giving it meaning I reach for the truth while the patterns keep on repeating battered and bruised I know the beauty in you I saw the phoenix fire and Oh how it flew   Aveline Aveline the venom is seething you've seen it all, now you're leaving if you don't return, what is the meaning? Tell me, Aveline.

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

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"I know the beauty in you
I saw the phoenix fire
and Oh how it flew'

{lines so sweetly sublime}

{the last verse seems so full
of a hopeless/questioning mood}

great poetry!!!

james;-)

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

wildy abstract razor sharp beauty of a poetic~ the first two lines speak volumes about how deep the childhood barbs go and continue to dig deeper throughout a life span~