Eternity

Eternity

Just a little touch

Gentle as can be

A twist of fate

A curb of destiny

And before we can blink our eyes

You are standing in front of me

Two friends

Daring to hope for something more

Linking hands willing take on together what ever the world has in store

Lips touch

He pulls her close

He can taste the longing on her lips

She wants this almost as much

As he

He tingles unexpectedly

He can not let go

A kiss both fast

And beautifully slow

New light is shone upon his world

She is not just a woman

She is so much more

He wants her all to himself

She is a bundle of everything he could ever adore

All of his life

He never needed anyone

But with just one kiss

All of those days are gone

How could he have lived without her

For so long?

They know they should stop

But their kiss feels like the breathe of life

And if they stop then surely they'll both drop

Dead

A billion thought run through his head

They're all about her

My love

You give me strength

He whispers it in his mind

If I lost you

My world would stop spinning

And I'd surely float

Into the abyss of space

And I

Love you more than I could ever say

I'd carve my declaration of love for you on the tablet of time

Because it is eternal

I can't think of time before

Can't dream of time after

Addicted to your smile

Intoxicated with your laughter

Driven crazy by your kiss

We're all apart of this world

But yours is the only piece I'd miss

Your love is the missing piece of my heart

Slot it in place

And give me the strength to fly

You're the evening star

I admired from a far

Bathed in moonlight

Your smile glows

A deeper longing

Than I have ever known

A precious moment

I have your light

Enjoying it all on my own

Here in my arms

Is where you will always belong

I could never hurt you

It would kill me to see you cry

Every second you're not smiling

A small part of me dies

I live to please you

And in doing so

Bring joy to my heart

Because your happiness is the blood, which in it flows

"Zaza"

DarkTower

Reviews

[Aehr]

The title seems absolutely perfect. I enjoyed this poem. I especially enjoyed some lines.

"He can not let go
A kiss both fast
And beautifully slow"

These lines, for me, are what justify the title of the poem.

"A billion thought(s) run through his head
They're all about her"

What a terrific end to the stanza.

Good job.
Keep writing.

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful and powerful poetry my friend.
"I live to please you
And in doing so
Bring joy to my heart
Because your happiness is the blood, which in it flows"
I like the reason and the purpose for the poetry. Always a pleasure to read your words. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Dark Tower]

Thank you for your kind words my friend.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[Sami Khalil]

"You're the evening star
I admired from a far
Bathed in moonlight
Your smile glows
A deeper longing"

A refreshing dose of romance and deeper longing. Lovely and wonderfully penned.

[Dark Tower]

Thank you very much Mr. khalil for your positive review.