Treat Mr Right right

Treat Mr Right right

 

If he touches you

He’s using you

If he doesn’t lay a hand on you

He’s excluding you

He’s over stepping if I get frustrated at the way other guys are viewing you

How many of those other guys you keep company with

Can honestly say that they’re not trying to ruin you

But it seems a female trait

To never see things straight

And before you know it it’s too late

The bad guy you never wanted becomes your fate

Because the good guy you neglected and abused replaced his love for you with bitter hate

Your one night of weakness

Evolves into an eternal bleakness

In a solitary prison with six inch six by six steel gates

Your every waking moment

You contemplate when it all went wrong

Forgetting that when Mr Right gave you his heart you took it for granted deluding that you’d always own it

Please don’t lie to yourself and go on and on about how you’re just victim

You said you loved him and but he never felt it when you were with him

Until eventually he cries and prays to the God above

To help him leave you

Because the pain of losing you is nothing compared to the pain of being trapped in your one sided love

 

B.C

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

"Because the pain of losing you is nothing compared to the pain of being trapped in your one sided love"
A long time love need two people with the same desire. I like the logic and the story in the poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Skye]

I adore this poem, so truthful.

[Samantha Lynn]

This poem is very informative. I guess I will just say... Thanks? lol Great writing. :)