Mr Right vs Mr Real

Mr Right vs Mr Real

A Poem by Dark Tower

Mr Right vs Mr Real

 

Mr. Right

 

He’ll always exactly what the right thing is and say it

He’ll have complete knowledge of the game but never play it

He’ll always know when you’re sad

He’ll always know when you’re hurt

He’ll always know when you’re mad

He’ll always know when you need him

He’ll always know what’s on your mind before you say it

He’ll always know what's you want before you say it

He’ll always know what the right thing is and that’s exactly what he’ll do

 

Mr. Real

 

He wont often know what the right thing to say is

But when he says it you’ll know he means

He’ll have dated a hundred girls before you

But you’ll always be the one he proposed to

He may not always know when you’re sad

But he’ll always know what makes you happy

He wont always know when you’ve been hurt

But he’ll be the first one there to comfort you

He may not always say he loves you

But when he does you know its true.

 

Bongani Armstrong Mhlangu

© 2012 Dark Tower


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People seem to reach out for the wrong things. Good people are hard to see. I like the logic of this poem. I tell people. Know the person you want to be with. They may be hiding weaknesses and craziness. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


i want mr real ....lol ...any way great write

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Beautiful

Posted 12 Years Ago


All women want a Mr. Real. But you have neglected Mr. Wrong.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on August 25, 2012
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