Kaela

Kaela

 

God was cruel

To place us so far apart

But even from across he seas

You still touch my heart.

 

I close my eyes

so I can see

a world where its just you and me

and suddenly everything seems to be

so much better

 

I stretch out my hand

Towards the stars

And hope that you can feel my hand brushing away your tears

Even though I’m a thousand miles away

If you really needed me

I’d spread my wings and be there for you today

 

Your starlit eyes gaze at me through the screen

Two mesmerising beacons of hope warming me

I find myself with no choice but to face the truth

The truth is quiet simply:

Kaela

I

Love

You

 

Bongani Armstrong Mhlangu

Reviews

[Loner]

A beautiful romantic poem that touches every
ones hearts ..... great write indeed.....

[Junert]

I like it. The truth is simple.

[Alexander143]

Kind of how I feel about my Natasha who's many miles away. I love your piece. I can relate.

[Alexander143]

Kind of how I feel about my Natasha who's many miles away. I love your piece. I can relate.

[afra]

awww so sweet ....i always enjoy ur work ...once again ..well done

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed this poem. Honest and strong statements open up the poem and I like the desire of real love at the end. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Dark Tower]

Thank you Coyote, this poem is a direct description of how I feel for her.

[Lisa Ring]

That is very beautiful, Bee. If only everyone could feel loved like that.

[Dark Tower]

I'm sure your significant other feels even more love for you.

[Lisa Ring]

And that comment was beautiful as well. :)

[melissa's heart]

oh this is beautiful, such hope, what a talented writer you are my friend.

[Dark Tower]

You are too kind Melissa. Thank you.

[melissa's heart]

oh your too sweet, God bless and have a great day