Pixie Dust

Pixie Dust

 

Love is like a pinch of pixie dust

One poof!

And its all gone

And suddenly everything that was perfect

Is now wrong.

 

Bongani Armstrong Mhlangu

 

Reviews

[Loner]

Excellent write , enjoyed it to the
fullest .....

[Cole Hayley]

Such a metaphor to describe such a fragile thing.

[Coyote Poetry]

I do like your logic in this poem. When you are young. We waste the gift of love. If i could go back in time. I would slow down the days and night with lovers. To enjoy every second. They go by too quickly. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Gazza]

That is short and powerful, straight to the point. It happens over a long period of time but when you enjoy something so much it never seems like a long time.

[Lisa Ring]

I like short and powerful pieces. But is it really that quick for you? My experience had been different. A slow torturous death of love over many years.

[Androglossia]

Ha! So true. Love can move mountains but it can also destroy everything. Thus thou shall not drift off when love cradles you:)

Straight talk. Great piece.

[Dark Tower]

Very true indeed. Thank you for your kind words.

[afra]

so true ....well done

[Dark Tower]

Thanks Afra, such a sweetheart.

[Junert]

Can't argue to that.

[Kerri Hart]

omg short simple
"a clear bullet to the heart" (as sum1 once said to me)
easy to undersatand and yet beautiful!
love it!

[melissa's heart]

B.C. quit being so homnious about love, yes it is fleating at times, but you get what you settle for. So settle on someone who is worthy to be loved. I love the poem though

[Dark Tower]

Too the contrary my dear, I am a great believer in love. I just dont believe it is unconditional.

[Dark Tower]

And Thank you, glad you enjoyed the poem

[melissa's heart]

I did and I hope I did not offend, it is unconditional if you except someone flaws and all and do not wish to change them. Thanks my friend