Afterlife

The last of the trilogy

Afterlife

 

 Aaaw Lil you look so peaceful now

Maggots all over your face

But I guess you’re used to things entering you by now

I’m mad at you, I’m not cruel though

Here I’m sure this acid will help get rid of those maggots

Oopsy the bottle slipped out of my hand, uh-oh

Well I guess its okay huh?

I mean you don’t really need a face where you are now, so..

Are you in hell?

I just have to know!

Give me a sip of that acid

I’ll see you in a bit once my body has gone all limp and flaccid

 

God sent me to heaven

But I chose to come to hell just to pick at you

Now you’re going to sit and listen to me for eternity,

I’m actually surprised you haven’t found something in here to do

Knowing you

Your first day you probably tried to give Satan a screw

I’m going to ask God to devise another punishment

I just think hells far too good for you

 

Bongani Armstrong Mhlangu

Reviews

[Gazza]

Very deep, the way you feel about this person is clearly articulated. Well written piece but leave vengeance to God.

[Dark Tower]

In the absence of divine intervention...

[melissa's heart]

Ooh, this one is a little vengful, but it tell how you feel about this individual very clearly.

[Dark Tower]

Thank you. She kind of deserved it.

[melissa's heart]

I can tell, she must of been some piece of work, so she got what she deserved. You don't mess with poets, for they write about you.

[Eloha]

What a peculiarily honest and humorous tone!

[Dark Tower]

Thanks, that's what I strive for.

[Cole Hayley]

Very hardhitting and very raw. I like it, i love the organic feel of it.

[Dark Tower]

Thanks Cole, I try to express as much emotion as I can

[Junert]

This is pure torture.

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This is very raw. You really paint a "hell" of a picture here :)

[Dark Tower]

Haha, thanks Cord.

[Lisa Ring]

Disregard my last comment...haha...and I'll be sure never to piss you off. Wicked and full of hate, the ugly echoes of an ugly betrayal. You have captured the raw emotion and indulging ones thoughts in pure hate. Very well done.

[Dark Tower]

Thanks so much Lisa. And I'm sure you would never upset me to that level.
Lilly was just a special case