Blow Me A Kiss

My first love.

Blow Me A Kiss

 

Your beauty grows every time I look at you

I cannot pretend that I only want to friends

If we numbers I’d be one and you’d be my two

They say you only live once

Well I want to spend my once with you

I feel pain when I imagine seeing you hurt

Blow you kisses at midnight so every day I know I did it first

 

If I had a time machine I’d take us to the past

That could cause a time loop

And forever our love would last

You may not be my first

But you are definitely my last

 

When you are near me

My heart radiates with power

The scent of your skin could over power any flower

I know it would be rushing for me to say “I do”

But I would give my life just to hear you say

I love you too

 

Bongani Armstrong Mhlangu

Reviews

[....]

Awe this write is so lovely and very expressive.

[MidKnight Rain]

Great poetry. The rhyme scheme was interesting might I ask what its called or where you found it.

[Dark Tower]

Thank you. Its mine I wrote it last night.

[MidKnight Rain]

I didn't mean to ask where the poem came from, I had no doubt it was of your own creation. I was asking about the rhyme scheme, is it a particular style

[Dark Tower]

My apologies. Its not a particular style...but I think it might just be a variation of the basic aba rhyme scheme.

[MidKnight Rain]

Cool I'll have to try that pattern sometime. Can you review my first piece?

[Dark Tower]

Of course, I would be more than happy to.