TORN.

A poem by me... It's about everything I want but can't have....

I wish I wasn’t so torn

 

My life is full of choices

None which I can make

 

Full of answers

None which I can find

 

Full of hope

None that will reach me

 

Full of happiness

None that has been granted to me

Author's Note

I just experienced alot, and under all my emotional stress these words just flowed straight out my heart and soul...

Its still under construction but if any of you have ideas for word choice let me know!!!

Reviews

[dante alexius]

It's interesting how in the first half, its stuff that YOU yourself can't do. In the second half it's stuff that can't be done to you, like "None that will reach me" or "None that has been granted to me"
This is very passive but perhaps deliberate.

anyhow, I feel you in your grief.
if you're torn, then gather the pieces of yourself and deal with them individually.
It sometimes helps to simplify life and deal with it from issue to issue.

takre care, take it easy

-Alex