Madeline

Madeline

Madeline my medicine

You truly are my everything

You’re smile heals the world

So perfect by nature

This stunning creature of Eden

 

Every moment away from you

Is a moment away from the sun

Shy, cute, smiles peak out

From the lustious lips

I couldn’t survive without you

 

Madeline my medicine

You truly are my everything

You’re smile heals the world

So perfect by nature

This stunning creature of Eden

 

You will always be mine

A key to a broken lock

Dramatic glitter dragonfly

My sweet escape

From this messed up place

 

Madeline my medicine

You truly are my everything

You’re smile heals the world

So perfect by nature

This stunning creature of Eden

 

When you’re breathless, I will fill you up

Arkansinian artistical architect

Of Love and grace

Your beauty kills the darkness

Your smile heals this burning world

 

Madeline my medicine

You truly are my everything

You’re smile heals the world

So perfect by nature

This stunning creature of Eden

 

Madeline my medicine

You truly are my everything

You’re smile heals the world

So perfect by nature

This stunning creature of Eden

 

 

Cuter than a button

My marvelous Madeline

Endless in emotions

I absolutely positutely

Love You

Author's Note

I wrote this song for my girlfriend. I was really hoping she would love it. Me and my friend recorded this, for our band, That one band that wasnt that good...

Reviews

[Tamelia Jade]

Totally cute :) I think you described her really well! And I think she sounds like a great girl!
I particularly liked these lines:
You will always be mine
A key to a broken lock
Dramatic glitter dragonfly
My sweet escape
From this messed up place

It created a great image :)
I just wanted to point one thing out though: You wrote, 'You’re smile' instead of 'Your smile'
Also, I wasn't quite sure what you were saying here - 'lustious'. Did you mean 'lustrous' or 'luscious' perhaps? And this word-I'm not sure if you meant it or not haha - 'positutely' is it meant to be positively?
Anyway, forget those cause this was very beautiful :) she sounds like one lucky girl! Thank you for sharing! :)

[Amelie]

Aaaw! this is just so sweet, I bet she'll go all giddy and fluttery when you play it before her eyes, and don't forget the "moves" and the love struck- rockstar face lol, I also used to be in a band, and how I wish I could've sang the songs I wrote before. only to suck coz my guy is miles away. anyhoo just one wee thing, or rather two, uhm "luscious" instead of lustious (except if this was a made up term) and no need to have "absolutely" before "positutely", the word is made up of positively and absolutely, (sorry I proofread as a side job)nevertheless, Dramatic glitter dragonfly,My sweet escape, From this messed up place- was just lovely, too lovely that I let out an embarrassing girly "aaaaw" ;)

[Dark Poetry]

Reaper, I know that your girlfriend is very much worthy of you, this poem is very breath-taking, it's like the romance tears up open my heart just for me to imagine that love. Keep on loving her, please hold on to each other.

[Manpreet]

This is a cute piece! I am sure it must have been great as a song!

[PokemonFan#1]

Aww! So sweet!

Keep it up!
=^_^=

[Renée]

You do very well Reaper ! One wouldn't realize such a name would carry such a soft heart !

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

A very sweet song for her. Nice repeating lines in this and descriptions to your love.

[Liderien]

This is beautiful. To be someones Madeline is a poet girls dream...so warm and just beautiful. Well done!

[Eve Brown]

Awwww. My heart just went all mushy for this. And that never happens. This is a wonderful, and incredibly cute poem. :)

[?]

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww....what sweet words of love

[PaperLife]

Absolutely Positutely perfect, but the hidden ending is the best :D