Madeline

Madeline

Madeline my medicine

You truly are my everything

You’re smile heals the world

So perfect by nature

This stunning creature of Eden

 

Every moment away from you

Is a moment away from the sun

Shy, cute, smiles peak out

From the lustious lips

I couldn’t survive without you

 

Madeline my medicine

You truly are my everything

You’re smile heals the world

So perfect by nature

This stunning creature of Eden

 

You will always be mine

A key to a broken lock

Dramatic glitter dragonfly

My sweet escape

From this messed up place

 

Madeline my medicine

You truly are my everything

You’re smile heals the world

So perfect by nature

This stunning creature of Eden

 

When you’re breathless, I will fill you up

Arkansinian artistical architect

Of Love and grace

Your beauty kills the darkness

Your smile heals this burning world

 

Madeline my medicine

You truly are my everything

You’re smile heals the world

So perfect by nature

This stunning creature of Eden

 

Madeline my medicine

You truly are my everything

You’re smile heals the world

So perfect by nature

This stunning creature of Eden

 

 

Cuter than a button

My marvelous Madeline

Endless in emotions

I absolutely positutely

Love You

Author's Note

I wrote this song for my girlfriend. I was really hoping she would love it. Me and my friend recorded this, for our band, That one band that wasnt that good...

Reviews

[Tamelia Jade]

Totally cute :) I think you described her really well! And I think she sounds like a great girl!
I particularly liked these lines:
You will always be mine
A key to a broken lock
Dramatic glitter dragonfly
My sweet escape
From this messed up place

It created a great image :)
I just wanted to point one thing out though: You wrote, 'You’re smile' instead of 'Your smile'
Also, I wasn't quite sure what you were saying here - 'lustious'. Did you mean 'lustrous' or 'luscious' perhaps? And this word-I'm not sure if you meant it or not haha - 'positutely' is it meant to be positively?
Anyway, forget those cause this was very beautiful :) she sounds like one lucky girl! Thank you for sharing! :)

[The Empty Hour Glass]

It is an amazing song, and if I were reading it from the writer's point of view I'm sure I could see just how well it flows in lyrical form. But seeing as I can't - I can only compliment you poem. This is pure opinion here, but I find this to be sickeningly sweet - so the chances are, Madeline would, will, or maybe even already does love this. Again, great job!

[Alex Vidmar]

Very nice. I know who this is about too. i think. Well done.

[Shy Girl]

I certainly hope she enjoyed the song. It was exellent. Well constructed and I could hear an electric guitar and keyboard in the background in my head. Nothing specific but still there all the same. It has a soft feel to the words, but within a strong heartbeating love. (if that makes sense) :)

[Who Cares]

This is so cute. I am sure your girlfriend will love this, you made her seem like quite the catch. nice imagery and very descriptive. Wonderful word choice, making this piece very respectable. Nice write

[Mirabella]

It is BEAUTIFUL! Really. The words are just so pretty.. And it just goes together perfectly. She's a lucky girl.. hehe :)

[Katie Flores]

aww... i went weak in the knees. adorable

[Morrigan Nicole]

Ummm, it was cute, yes, and I am sure she would adore it, no question about it. But, frankly, I found the repitition of " your smile heals the world...." annoying after the second time, but besides that, poetic, fun, and sweet :)

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

Wow, this is a beautiful song. She should love this. I can tell it's from your heart which makes it way better than jotting down stuff. I love "My sweet escape from this messed up place". I know I could say that about my boyfriend.
Again this is sweet and great! :)


Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG:)

[Robert The Frank]

A very beautiful beautiful song. Every word you put into this i could tell were pluck from the fruit of your soul. Love in it's purest form right here.

[Karina]

Awwww so sweet!! I bet she loved it alot!! :)