Madeline

Madeline

Madeline my medicine

You truly are my everything

You’re smile heals the world

So perfect by nature

This stunning creature of Eden

 

Every moment away from you

Is a moment away from the sun

Shy, cute, smiles peak out

From the lustious lips

I couldn’t survive without you

 

Madeline my medicine

You truly are my everything

You’re smile heals the world

So perfect by nature

This stunning creature of Eden

 

You will always be mine

A key to a broken lock

Dramatic glitter dragonfly

My sweet escape

From this messed up place

 

Madeline my medicine

You truly are my everything

You’re smile heals the world

So perfect by nature

This stunning creature of Eden

 

When you’re breathless, I will fill you up

Arkansinian artistical architect

Of Love and grace

Your beauty kills the darkness

Your smile heals this burning world

 

Madeline my medicine

You truly are my everything

You’re smile heals the world

So perfect by nature

This stunning creature of Eden

 

Madeline my medicine

You truly are my everything

You’re smile heals the world

So perfect by nature

This stunning creature of Eden

 

 

Cuter than a button

My marvelous Madeline

Endless in emotions

I absolutely positutely

Love You

Author's Note

I wrote this song for my girlfriend. I was really hoping she would love it. Me and my friend recorded this, for our band, That one band that wasnt that good...

Reviews

[Tamelia Jade]

Totally cute :) I think you described her really well! And I think she sounds like a great girl!
I particularly liked these lines:
You will always be mine
A key to a broken lock
Dramatic glitter dragonfly
My sweet escape
From this messed up place

It created a great image :)
I just wanted to point one thing out though: You wrote, 'You’re smile' instead of 'Your smile'
Also, I wasn't quite sure what you were saying here - 'lustious'. Did you mean 'lustrous' or 'luscious' perhaps? And this word-I'm not sure if you meant it or not haha - 'positutely' is it meant to be positively?
Anyway, forget those cause this was very beautiful :) she sounds like one lucky girl! Thank you for sharing! :)

[Beckie D]

The first thing that came into my mind when I read this was: Cute!!! Cute to the absolute max! I could tell straight away that it was a song. I would honestly love to hear it.

The chorus is my favorite "Madeline my medicine", that line got me from the start. There is something special about a love being able to cure you and that is what I think this song sums up: there is some love so powerful that it can cure you like medicine.

Honestly, the most sweetest poem I have seen on this site. A lot of writers on this website write about death and destruction but this song tells a story of love and beauty. Definitely a winner.

[Kiara]

Awww this is adorable, I love it :) I bet she did too

[Victorious]

Dear Reaper,

Very cute. I hoped she really liked it. The repetition suits to emphasize the stunning attraction you have to her. I believe my favorite lines would have to be, "this stunning creature of Eden," makes me think of soul mates. Since this piece seems personal, I withhold any critics because it's personal. So, it's heartfelt and expresses a deep love.

Thank you for sharing!

Sincerely Victorious

God bless

[John F Carver]

I hope she likes it. what fun to have a girlfriend who likes that sort of stuff.

[Xx_Mizfit_xX]

Beautiful piece, I love the word selection you used!

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the song. Hard to get a love song out nowadays. People forgot about love with busy lives and too much to do. I like the way you wrote of appreciation for someone who made you content. A positive and beautiful ending to a outstanding poem.
Coyote

[SkrillexLover :)]

Supper cute! :) I really like this

[Dayran]

Its a wonderful teen fascination with beauty and love. It ought to make a great song.

[CHRIS ANDES]

haha,i love it just the way it is =]

[Sam Romero (TBC)]

Really cute!! and if you dont mind telling me, whats the name of your band?