Ball of Madeline

My little rose of beauty

Soft words escape your mouth

Stunning words that tease my ears

Hidden beauty only seen by me

A sleepy soul waiting for release

Not by death but in living

Unburdened love you share with all

Passionate grace flows out of you

Relic mind trapped in young beautiful body

Forbidden fruit lingers there undeservedly seen by all

Taste of creation in our creation

A breeze follows your every step

Refilling the world around you

Love not hate fills me now

You are an unmade picture of goddess abilities

You brush back my advantages

Hanging on till I sweep you off for good

Love itself cant describe how I feel about you

My world is yours to rule

My heart hides in the loving palms of your hands

I would give it all to you, just to see you smile

A smile that ends the fighting inside

Kills the dark urges, lighten the aurora

Revives my very being

I’m yours

You’re mine

Let’s take on the world

Never look back

Only look at each other

Because we are in love

FOREVER and ALWAYS

Reviews

[Shy Girl]

This was abso a very good piece. So much emotion inside these lines...so much :)

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

Oh my my, this is wonderful :) And very sweet. Every line is so beautiful and you done a great job. I have so many favorite lines but my ultimate favorite are:

"My heart hides in the loving palms of your hands
I would give it all to you, just to see you smile". I think those two lines are so beautiful and very well-written.
Outstanding! :D

Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG:)

[Deandra Dawn]

Very well written, flows easily. Good job.