Raven,Death, Dyson, Death

Alice had never loved anyone. She was never super close with her parents. The mother who allowed herself to be a punching bag and the father who would later take everything away that she held dear.

The nearest thing to love she experienced in the past was a crush she had on this girl two years ago. She never fancied herself as a lesbian but she was extremely attracted to this Goth goddess.  Raven was her name but it must have been fake. Raven walked the halls of their high school with pale white skin with long flowing black hair with long hot pink streaks in it.

Alice liked her because she didn’t give a f**k about life. Alice had the same feelings so she could relate. She dreamt of kissing her and long walks together about how much life sucked. But things never worked out and she probably dead like most people she knew.

But somehow she knew this was love. She needed him. She thought about him ever since she meant him, though a lot of the first thoughts were if he was going to rape her or not.

And deep down she even loved Eve. She wanted to raise that child. She never had a maternity bone in her bone before this. She never even owned a doll. But now all she wanted to do was make sure this child was safe and lived through this fucked up world.

Alice puts down the journal and goes to hold Eve. She can’t but help to smile at her.

Eve has been restless ever since Derek had left. Deep down Eve must have known he wasn’t here.

Alice brings Eve and the journal to the chair to relax. She flips the next page.

Date April 21^st 2013

We found something. At first we didn’t know what it could do or what is was for. The object was a stunning red gem in the shape of a heart. In was found in old castle like place. We raided the grey brick storage walls and I found it there.

I kept it for my own and didn’t tell anyone but Maddy and now this journal. And knowing I have both near me at all times, the secret is safe.

Date June 2^nd 2013

I can’t this happened. I should have paid more attention. I should have been stronger. Now what do I do that she is dead. The zombies got her. We were on a hunting trip and we got trapped by a wild pack of mindless creatures.

I don’t know how we didn’t know they were going to be there. The scouts said the place was clear. That’s why I told her to come with me. I was supposed to be there alone but I was selfish and needed her with me.

It’s my fault they got her.

 

Date: June 3^rd 2013

People at camp are surprised I’m alive. There shocked faces are stuck on me all day. I walk down the center of the camp holding Maddy’s torn up corpse. The camp is shocked.

I go to my quarters and lay her on our bed. After a few moments with her, I go to Eve and kiss her forehead. I call for Lilly to watch her over while I go be stupid.

I leave the house and go to kill the men who sent me there. I find them in the bar, laughing and celebrating my death. Their faces turn to a ghostly white when they see me. I plunge my knife into their chests and slaughter the three of them.

The last thing the one says, “We did it for Dyson.”

Dyson has lustful eyes for Maddy for all of the time he knew her.  He was always jealous I was with her. And with me out of the way, he would have got her.

Next I go to Dyson’s quarters. But apparently someone tipped him off and he escaped.

My goal in life is now to find and infect as much as I can on him.

 

Alice drops the journal.

She is stunned to find out what happened to Derek. Poor guy.

Reviews

[TKBickel]

You know I’m a big fan of your story so I hope I’m not coming over as a b***h as I pick on a few things. Subtlety isn’t one of my stronger suits.
‘She dreamt of kissing her and long walks together about how much life sucked.’ Should walks be talks?
‘She thought about him ever since she meant him,’ Change meant to met or first laid eyes on him. (Sorry it’s the romantic in me.)
‘She never had a maternity bone in her bone before this.’ Maternal bone in her body
‘I can’t this happened.’ I can’t believe this happened.
‘Now what do I do that she is dead.’ What do I do now she is dead?
Ok done with the pick on you part and to what I loved.
Great description of Raven and you’ve created more mystery in your journal entries. It sucks that the chapter was so short. I want more so buck up and give a lady what she wants.

[Kiari Sabon]

oh my it was great :}

[Shy Girl]

I sooo never saw that one coming...Derek is infected too...he seemed so sane. What is Alice gonna do without him?? She has no idea how to raise Eve..neither does he or he wouldn't have left..but still. But then again he knew what was going to happen to him and left her with somebody that wasn't infected..so far. Maybe Alice can start fresh..her and Eve. I'm still not sure of the Oracle though. You have got my attention as I've read these chapters. I may have to go back and see if I missed anything else. Sooo did not see that one...WOW!!

[xSamilynnx]

really good!!!! n i hate to say this but im not sure if it was purposeful or not... wen u said she didnt have a maternity in her body u but bone twice instead of body... o.o but otherwise really good :D

[Ice Girl]

I loved it!

[quarintine_deathangel]

Nice cliffhanger, you got a plot thicker than plum pudding XD awesome write!

[Sylvana]

The book is getting very intersting. Good chapter.