a love song
A Poem by Elizabeth
I believe
That one day
You'll come my way
And I wish
On a star
That you'll stay
Stay with me
Stay with me
Right till the end
When you're here
All is bright
The world fades
Everything's all right
Twinkling eyes
As you smile
You are my moon
And my light
I love you
That is true
If only
You loved me too
But it's okay
I'll watch you shine
From far away
Everyday
© 2019 Elizabeth
Author's Note
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Reviews
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I love this, it is a wonderful poem of love desired, maybe not finding it returned but maybe someday that will happen.
Posted 1 Year Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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1 Year Ago
Thank you!! I'm glad that you liked it!
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Sometimes what we long for is out of reach. This is a poem that I can relate to Elizabeth.
Chris
Posted 1 Year Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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A touching and very honest piece, well done, good read.
Posted 4 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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4 Years Ago
Thank you so much!
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Sometimes for your own sanity you have to be strong.
Posted 5 Years Ago
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5 Years Ago
True, having a strong mindset is important...thank you for your comment:)
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Beautiful. I love it. Reminds me of a long lost love.
Posted 5 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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5 Years Ago
Thank you so much for your review ♥️😊
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The longing in this arouses a bitter sweet feeling of a long distant love. Beautifully written!
Posted 5 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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5 Years Ago
Thank you so much for your kind words♥️♥️
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Added on November 2, 2019
Last Updated on November 2, 2019
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Elizabeth India
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