Friends Forever

Friends Forever

A Poem by Elizabeth

Since forever you've been my friend
And now it should come to an end
For you are to go far far away
Leaving me all alone in here.

But distance can't make me forget you
And I hope you'll remember me too
In times of sadness, times of happiness
to have you with me, I was blessed

It's just so hard to let you go
Oh! Why you hurt me so?
I can't remember a time you weren't my friend
And I hope this isn't the end.

© 2017 Elizabeth


Author's Note

Elizabeth
Written for my dear friend who is now 3000 km away from me.

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A lovely poem that flows smoothly, has good rhymes, and doesn't lose the emotions between words. Yup...its so hard to bid a friend that last goodbye...more if they're so close to you that you can't imagine how life would be without them. That also, somehow, makes us disinterested in making new friends...well, that's what I have observed.
Anyway, thanks for the wonderful read!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Elizabeth

7 Years Ago

thank you so much for your kind words!
Zoya

7 Years Ago

My pleasure
I really like this one, because it is so damn relatable! thank you for sharing an excellent poem!

keep writing :D

Posted 7 Years Ago


Elizabeth

7 Years Ago

thank you for your review!
This is short and sweet. It reminds me of when I moved away from my close friends when I was younger.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Elizabeth

7 Years Ago

Thank you for your time and review
so friends forever we shall remain,and i hope you feel the same

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Elizabeth

7 Years Ago

Thank you for your comment!
That bond never falters even with distance, a loving tribute to your friendship, well done, good read.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Elizabeth

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your review!
i suddenly remember my best friend who's also far away.huhu

Posted 7 Years Ago


Elizabeth

7 Years Ago

Distance is just geographical separation. near and dear friends with always be in our hearts.
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L.C. Jarrette

7 Years Ago

i couldn't agree more. you're welcome
Hard to keep friendship alive. But new world. Phones, computers and new tech. Always vacations. I do understand this poem. I have lost many good friends in my life before new tech. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


Elizabeth

7 Years Ago

Your review have indeed made my day! thank you so much.
Coyote Poetry

7 Years Ago

I'm glad and you are welcome.
My best friend is only a few metres away yet mentally 100000 miles away. We fought for the stupidest reason and now we are friends no longer. I urge you hold on to that friend because he/she brings out great energy in you to write

Posted 7 Years Ago


Elizabeth

7 Years Ago

The loss of a friend is indeed very hard. Thank you so much for your words.

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