H e a r t

Going through a spiritual struggle and wrote out my feelings to short out my thoughts. One of my darker poems that was resentful of posting. Love to hear what everyone has to say.

Heart

 

My heart has been played.

You took refuge inside it,

then t  o  r   e it apart.

 

My heart has been played.

You said you would bring me light,

But it was fool's gold.

 

My heart has been played.

Friends of yours, shadows moved in

and wrought destruction.

 

My heart has been played.

I trusted you, you failed me.

I don't trust anymore.

Author's Note

Please don't judge on the colors or font. At the time I was experimenting and many liked how it turned out.

Reviews

[indieRokker]

*Sighs* You've just expressed how a lot of people may feel.
The destruction of unhappily ever after, of how a heart can be destroyed.
The first stanza was a great course of weariness, the pain it wallowed and took in. Sometimes it's hard to wonder, if Love is enough.
Amazing Poem DF :)
indie♥

[deeps]

I know thsi feeling really well. I like the font and set up.
I think it's wonderfully expressed as well.