Open Doors

Open Doors

A Poem by DarkFairy
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Old piece written in a time of personal struggle for understanding, and acceptance. The feeling of lost and rejection very influential

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Open Doors

 

 

You open the doors

to our chosen path abroad.

This is the right choice.

 

How you betray me

the door closed in front of me.

My hopes are shattered.

 

You open the doors

for others and shut me out.

Unrighteous you are.

© 2009 DarkFairy


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well, this is really well written and i like the flow of the words,but im not really sure i understand it. haha, it says in the first stanza "This is the right choice." but then in the later stanzas it talks of betrayal and you know, hopes being shattered and the person being unrighteuos. it seems sort of contradictory? i dunno, im prolly not deep enough to figure it out -.-'
but this is a good write, df:) keep it up.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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DarkFairy
DarkFairy

Aurora, CO



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