Decision

Decision

A Poem by DarkFairy
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There are two paths that you can take. But which will you decide to take in the end?

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Decision

 

 

 

Death is forever.

Is it pleasant or dreadful?

In heaven or hell?

 

Heaven is golden

Hell is a fiery lake.

Which do you prefer?

 

Heaven's gates await.

Take the straight and narrow path

To treasures and more.

 

Hell is full of screams.

Souls burn for eternity

Lucifer is pleased.

 

The straight and narrow

Or eternity of pain.

Which path will you take?

© 2009 DarkFairy


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woah, this is awesome! i dont really beleive in heaven or hell, but if they do exist, then im pretty sure how you described them would be correct :)

"The straight and narrow
Or eternity of pain.
Which path will you take?"

i love that stanza^^ the question like, leaves the reader hanging and actually wondering where they're going to end upp. this is a really fantastic writer, df :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


very will put......descriptions were great easy to fallow

Posted 15 Years Ago


i reaally like our work it realy gets the wheels turining in ones brain and makes them stop and think.. great job write more please :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


I like this a lot as well. It really gets you thinking. It's also a bit of a scary subject. I agree, again, with Reaper. I think you should add a tiny bit more description. I love the structure of the poem. Very neat and it flows well. Great job.

Posted 15 Years Ago


Very nice Dark. I just think you should have put some more descriptions of heaven and hell, Mainly hell, because thats fun to describe. Other then that, nice concept. Ive seen poems about the two but not one comparing them before.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on May 15, 2009

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DarkFairy

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