The Outcasts

This is a poem for anyone who feels alone and left out. This is just to let you know you're not alone. Somebody loves you.

The Outcasts

We're the people who were left behind

we're the people who no one wants to find,

we're the people who were left alone,

forced to think that hell is a place called home,

We're the people who were pushed around,

who only knew life as a battleground 

the people whose souls are forever lost,

who have to stick together no matter what the cost,

we are the abandoned and unloved, the outcasts,

the people who tried to escape our pasts,

we may be outcasts, but we're outcasts together,

and we'll have each other's backs forever

Author's Note

What do you think? I'm always in need of constructive criticism!

Reviews

[Tiffany Boles]

I love it. All the rhymes are great and the ending takes the cake! A wonderful piece, well done.

[annabellee]

Such an empowering poem.
Loved the last lines.
"we may be outcasts, but we're outcasts together,
and we'll have each other's backs forever"
Gorgeous write :)

[Sahara M.]

Thank you. I was thinking of me and my Best friends when I wrote this poem. My friends are like family to me and I love them so much. Me and my friends are kind of like the outcasts in 8th grade in my middle school.

[annabellee]

friends are a wonderful thing...
you're most welcome :)

[Empty Spaces]

this gave me tingles.......in my body

[Sahara M.]

Thanks.....I think.

[Gianna Y]

I love it... SO MUCH. Very inspiring.

[Sahara M.]

inspiring, just like you :)

[Empty Spaces]

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW THATS SOOOOOOOOOOO CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!