Me , you and enternity

Me, you and eternity

By Dark Daughter

As his flaming lips touch by body,

his dark deep eyes captivate my soul.

Everything beside him,

everything seems so dead and cold.

His immortal love,

his deathly kiss,

my mortal mistake

made me his.

I don't regret for loving him

after all, my whole belongs to him

'cause he gives me life, he gives me love

he gives me everything a soul needs

Always and forever

till the sun stop rising 

till our blood dry out in our veins

I'll be still enjoying your enternal warm embrance.

I love you,

I'll always do

as the yearss pass by 

there's no one else 

there's only me and you. 

That's the onlυ thing that really matters.

Reviews

[SmileBig :)]

Hmm. I like, but there doesn't seem to be a rhyme scheme. Then again I probably just didn't notice it lol. You have spelling errors, but other then that I love it :)

[KillerWithWords]

Clever rhyming. The content is fantastic. It really is beautiful.

[DarkDaughter]

Thank you (: