My Dead Best Friend

It's kinda short and brief . I i dedicate this to my x-best fiends. I really miss them sometimes..

MY DEAD BEST FRIEND

By Dark Daughter

The Darkness Pierced his soul

It made him empty, cruel and cold

I'm not sure what happent

I don't remember if something wrong I said

the only sure is that

My best friend is dead...

Reviews

[Wórdsmíth]

That's again pretty nice but sad to read or to hear or to feel...there's pain for your friend in your this writin', hey...mostly i read out your poem'sm i saw there pain in max. one's...may i ask the reason behin' such kinda pain....?
i just read out but not even read, i felt it deeply, your writin' skills're too awesome...as i saw from your way.
nice piece, but depth inside your words n just pierced...

[Jordan's Back]

Damn This is a Really somber and dark piece, and very sorrowful.