Dark Love

Dark Love

by Dark Daughter

Incredibly light,

is your figoure in the night.

Your eyes are like the stars,

they shine,

although they're made of dust.

Your perfume fills the air

and in combination with your long dark hair,

they smell so gorgeus,

they smell like yearn.

Beauty of the Dark,

Child of the Night.

How can you be like that?

How can you be so full of light?

Your grace captured me,

your lips brought me so much plesure.

Take me, take me into the shadows,

where I can finally be yours.

Reviews

[Bronwen Cox Hollinger]

I really enjoyed this. :-)

[Jordan's Back]

i love the depth and flow of this piece it was truly a dark somber romance.

[Sasha]

Very artsy, and descriptive. Nice poem! :D

[DarkDaughter]

thank you (:

[Elaine]

I like your imagery, but you have a few grammatical mistakes, and some spelling errors- I would suggest giving it a quick read through, and edit. Nice closing line by the way- the desperation in the tone is perfect.

[DarkDaughter]

Oh.. Thank you Elaine I'll check it. (: