it's that last one

it's that last one

A Poem by NoPoetry
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a personal one probably not for the chapbook

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pain in a new place every day
organs underperforming
skin chipping off my face
gut, out of shape for exercise
food laws
moderation of mind 24/7 duty
short circulation
touch starvation

© 2022 NoPoetry


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All I could think of here is this poet needs some tlc. Start looking after yourself. A good diet and moderate exercise like a good walk each day can work wonders. Exercise gets those endorphins released. Slowly does it mind, pace yourself. And then I thought, I might be barking up the wrong tree entirely.

Chris

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

NoPoetry

2 Years Ago

no you're absolutley right. I do have some of those boxes checked, but a few of them are lacking qui.. read more



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All I could think of here is this poet needs some tlc. Start looking after yourself. A good diet and moderate exercise like a good walk each day can work wonders. Exercise gets those endorphins released. Slowly does it mind, pace yourself. And then I thought, I might be barking up the wrong tree entirely.

Chris

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

NoPoetry

2 Years Ago

no you're absolutley right. I do have some of those boxes checked, but a few of them are lacking qui.. read more

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Added on April 15, 2022
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NoPoetry
NoPoetry

Peterborough, ON, Canada



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Hope to surround myself with people who enjoying writing and talking about poetry and things like it. Check out my spoken word on youtube: youtube.com/channel/UC8sxo67tQEZYqlOQ8cqAVPg more..

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A Poem by NoPoetry