Nightfall Smiles

Blood red moon
fills my breathe
dark passion falls
my lips bleed
from the cold morbid kiss

Painful transformation
so beautiful and sweet
my flesh reborn
from pure dark nectar
I begin to fade

Seeping in my veins
my new world home
shadow depths reign
posessing and cursing
thoughts remain

Imprints of light
left far behind
lurking play unfolds
as nightfall smiles
all pulse of heart gone away

I am bound in darkened laughter

Reviews

[~Lizzy♬]

I thought this poem had a great melodic touch to it. Well done! :)

~Lizzy~

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Very nice... and poetic nature that is great :)

[Lily Mae]

I really enjoyed this.. nice and dark:) xx

[LinBin]

Blood Kiss.......Great poem....essence of the vampire I go from this.....well done x

[Don Shaw]

I like it, great read.

[Dahlia Phoenix]

This poem has brightened my day for sure!

I love the sheer essence your expressing through this poem as the darkness infuses the person to become one, welcoming it to their souls.

"Painful transformation
so beautiful and sweet
my flesh reborn
from pure dark nectar
I begin to fade"

A strong touch to this poem and it has a dark kind of aura from it when read. Nice write.

[CrushedPepperMinTCHrist..]

what about Darkner laughter?

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

"Dark Beauty" comes to mind when I read this. It beautiful and dark, like your name. I'm not so good with titles myself, either. Wonderfully written. Nicely done!

[stars are far]

This was nice
i liked the first stanza a lot :)

[Inyourshadow]

I like it, love the way night enfolds and engulfs one firstly by the darkness and then seeping into our senses through late night sounds and smells shadows and starlight dancing celebrating the end of day. This is a beautiful addition for the Halloween season. Keep em' coming