Nightfall Smiles

Blood red moon
fills my breathe
dark passion falls
my lips bleed
from the cold morbid kiss

Painful transformation
so beautiful and sweet
my flesh reborn
from pure dark nectar
I begin to fade

Seeping in my veins
my new world home
shadow depths reign
posessing and cursing
thoughts remain

Imprints of light
left far behind
lurking play unfolds
as nightfall smiles
all pulse of heart gone away

I am bound in darkened laughter

Reviews

[Frank Purcell]

One simple convenient immagery comes into mind whilst reading this : Dark Beauty.
Coincidental? Good write!

[~Blue Fantasy~]

It sounds like a vampire. Very dark and eerie

[Kenneth The Poet]

Dark and dreary, like a Slayer raining blood.

[Ruth]

What an ending! You make your work so intense at the endings especially, I am always impressed
xoxo

[NZane]

Dark, and beautiful. Nice job ^^

[rwar ish me]

Very nice.
A dark wonderful flow being sent through it
Very good
~Amai

[Miranda Manne]

I think this is the most moving of your works for me, and it definitely makes me shiver. I would suggest you start looking for other words to convey a sense of darkness that aren't "dark." It is a word you use a lot, and it might lose its power someday if you keep on with it.

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

Dark and nicely worded!

[Amila Jay]

Wow, this is really dark and intimate, nice write:)

[Tainted Devotion]

Very enchanting and also kinda has a magical feel to it. Very beautiful and loved the imagery. Nicely done.