Nightfall Smiles

Blood red moon
fills my breathe
dark passion falls
my lips bleed
from the cold morbid kiss

Painful transformation
so beautiful and sweet
my flesh reborn
from pure dark nectar
I begin to fade

Seeping in my veins
my new world home
shadow depths reign
posessing and cursing
thoughts remain

Imprints of light
left far behind
lurking play unfolds
as nightfall smiles
all pulse of heart gone away

I am bound in darkened laughter

Reviews

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Seeping in my veins
my new world home
shadow depths reign
posessing and cursing
thoughts remain
I love that part. Don't give up! 100/100

[Raheem Lyttle Kiyaga]

Imma give it another read/review

[SheActsLikeSummer]

Dark, creepy, emotional. So well written, truly amazing.

[Celestine Night91]

It's been awhile a while since I've read a good dark poem such as this-amazing

[Daytonight]

Very good dark write. Keep on penning.

[Jeremy Baker]

Very sombre tones and images. Like it!

[Jibey]

I love the dark richness of your writing, like dark chocolate, filled with blood-red cherry liqueur... cold kisses and light left lurking... and the laughter of the gods

[Yari Garcia (Older Prof..]

*Breath* (second sentence)
*Possessing* (third stanza, fourth line)

:-)

[EMF]

Marvelously dark and image laden poem. Filled with shadowed beauty. Marvelous.

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haunting and dark..nicely done