Awakening

Drum beat of heart
calling to my soul
dances of praise
of once upon a time
I know

Painted faces
songs gushing from heart
listening to the pieces
that have not departed
from my soul

Hearing the echo of the winds
that rejoice
distant memories now
become the noise of drums
connections felt strong and true

Playing the pieces
of the drum beats flow
rapture exists here no more
as I dance in the night sky

Remembrance of my ghost song
so bold and true
beautiful awakening
upon the morning dew

Author's Note

Rough Draft

Reviews

[Sleepless]

for a rough draft this is great ! amazing piece of work !!(:

[Raheem Lyttle Kiyaga]

I liked it, its awesome

[Daytonight]

Great work. Well done for a rough draft. Keep on penning.

[Jazique]

Wow captivating to the soul of such meloness of the morning dew. Nice job with description as they painted such an image. Well done.

[Jibey]

A pleasing evocation of the past... brought on by the beat of the dram...

[WritersSoul]

Amazing inspiration of a beautiful write that envisions great imagery :)
Beth :3

[∂αʌ<..]

for a rough draft...this is really good! well...i sincerely dont think you should re write it...its just perfect!

[Chris Taylor]

A great start and maybe finish to a wonderful poem. I loved the flow and the underling message as well. I really enjoyed this piece.

[Yari Garcia (Older Prof..]

For a rough draft, it sure is coming out amazing thus far.

[Frank Purcell]

Thoroughly enjoying poem, especially the last stanza was very powerful, great write!