Forever

A tasteful kiss
forever mine
I am wrapped
within the depth of
his caged soul

Drops of passion
drip from my
mortal lips
ecstasy enticing
to the touch as we
entwine as one

Sweet nectar
over flowing within
the blood red moon
dew drops of sinful play
he forever

Beckons my heart away

Reviews

[Frank Purcell]

Tantalising, yet frustrating, painful, yet beautiful. "drops of passion". such a simple phrase but i love it!

[Don Shaw]

Great work.'' Dew drops of sinful play he forever beckons my heart away '' i love that

[rose with love]

i felt it very sensual. it is well penned and it was an enjoyable read

[~Blue Fantasy~]

Very expressive and well written. Thank you for sharing.

[J Todd Underhill]

Ah, a love to stretch across eternities. How I feel this poem. It has almost a vampiric edge to it. Being a fan of Dracula and all things vampire (Not the sparkling fairies though), I was enraptured in reading this. well done!

[Demi Rose]

heart felt and charming. it plays with a hint of darkness but is ever so lovely.

[LinBin]

well crafted piece, very well presented x

[M Garcia]

Nice

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

Nice romantic poem!

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

flow is so nice and the love flows so nicely in this wonderful poem..I love it:)