Forever

A tasteful kiss
forever mine
I am wrapped
within the depth of
his caged soul

Drops of passion
drip from my
mortal lips
ecstasy enticing
to the touch as we
entwine as one

Sweet nectar
over flowing within
the blood red moon
dew drops of sinful play
he forever

Beckons my heart away

Reviews

[Raheem Lyttle Kiyaga]

Nice and erogenous

[Sethnicity]

Very well done! You must have been quite enchanted when writing this! I can feel a Gothic whisp to it! ;)

[Daytonight]

Very sensual and passionate. Well done!

[Amila Jay]

Great write:)

[Hotwater]

it certainly hits the spot! Some cracking reviews for the supa dupa poem!
*bird*

[Genie Mouland]

wow thats so beautifuly written good work!

[Vinod Kumar U K]

Beauty tips of the endless love`s receipe..

[Jeremy Baker]

I love the other-worldly' sense I get whilst reading this. Great descriptions and metaphors.

[Sleeping Maiden]

So passionate! I loved it. I love how you described this love! Brilliant work!

[stars are far]

nice work ..
well done :)