Forever
A Poem by
Dark Beauty
A tasteful kiss forever mine I am wrapped within the depth of his caged soul Drops of passion drip from my mortal lips ecstasy enticing to the touch as we entwine as one Sweet nectar over flowing within the blood red moon dew drops of sinful play he forever Beckons my heart away
© 2011 Dark Beauty
Reviews
Love the final four lines so seductive and asn playful as they can be interpreted many ways. This is an incredibly beautiful piece to love especially the wrapped within the depth of his caged soul, love it. keep em' coming
Posted 12 Years Ago
I like this a lot. Perfectly dark and romantically tempting. Your word choice and imagery are excellent.
Posted 12 Years Ago
I like this a lot. Perfectly dark and romantically tempting. Your word choice and imagery are excellent.
I agree with the others, I love the last line as well. It flows very nice and has decent imagery. A good write. Keep it up!!
Posted 12 Years Ago
I agree with the others, I love the last line as well. It flows very nice and has decent imagery. A good write. Keep it up!!
Forever beckons my heart away... mmm I like that thought lol.. Another wonderful write.. keep them coming..xx
Posted 12 Years Ago
Forever beckons my heart away... mmm I like that thought lol.. Another wonderful write.. keep them coming..xx
taste ful kiss ..sweet nectar to the taste..dew drops of sinful play...he has been busy calling your heart away .. nez pais?
Posted 12 Years Ago
taste ful kiss ..sweet nectar to the taste..dew drops of sinful play...he has been busy calling your heart away .. nez pais?
There is a dynasty of majestic substance here in the exotic flavor of your writing. It caresses my senses with superior style
Posted 12 Years Ago
There is a dynasty of majestic substance here in the exotic flavor of your writing. It caresses my senses with superior style
Wow, a very cool piece here :) Great imagery, and deep feelings expressed lively here. Like a vampire night or somethin, hehe. Great job!!
M.
Posted 12 Years Ago
Wow, a very cool piece here :) Great imagery, and deep feelings expressed lively here. Like a vampire night or somethin, hehe. Great job!!
M.
A very sensual and deeply moving peice. I loved this very much. There's a pain in this poem, and a tinge of saddness there, but it was still deeply romantic in it's own way. Loved your word choices and how you expressed these deep emotions in this piece. Very well done.
Posted 12 Years Ago
A very sensual and deeply moving peice. I loved this very much. There's a pain in this poem, and a tinge of saddness there, but it was still deeply romantic in it's own way. Loved your word choices and how you expressed these deep emotions in this piece. Very well done.
Intense with passionate feelings.. 'wrapped' in his 'caged soul' - a striking image...'ecstasy enticing...entwine..' nice... and 'dew drops of sinful play... Darkly delightful... The writing is hot with painful desire...
Posted 12 Years Ago
Intense with passionate feelings.. 'wrapped' in his 'caged soul' - a striking image...'ecstasy enticing...entwine..' nice... and 'dew drops of sinful play... Darkly delightful... The writing is hot with painful desire...
Sad yet wonderfully expressed.
Posted 12 Years Ago
Sad yet wonderfully expressed.
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Added on September 25, 2011
Last Updated on September 25, 2011
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Dark Beauty Tucson, AZ
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Love to write Poetry, and SpokenWord looking for reviews with good or bad feedback as I will give reviews as well and any ideas are welcome!!!!! "Keep Writing, my pen is my
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