I LOVE THIS IDEA!!! You created amazing imagery and the flow was perfect. I can't find anything that I would fix about it. I love the concept and the mood and morbidness is grabbing. Over all...this was sick!
A dark poem. I like the use of the Soldier of death. Allowing the reader to see a vision that is real and possible. I like the description and story in the poem. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote
Dark eerie piece you have penned why do shadows get such a bad reputation lol. Sounds like someone hurt you bad and left you facing the nights alone doubting yourself. Sometimes the shadows are a place to hide oneself while they heal or while they plan their revenge lol. Keep em' coming
I am linking you poetic output as of late, sorry I have not been able to comment on them all, but I read while at work and sometimes I get called away in a moments notice, but I did want to drop a line and let you know I am liking this!
Love to write Poetry, and SpokenWord looking for reviews with good or bad feedback as I will give reviews as well and any ideas are welcome!!!!! "Keep Writing, my pen is my
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