Dark Symphony

Laughter plays sweet music
 dance by night pervades,
 I am free, wings of black unfold
 I sing from the depth of my malicious slumber.
 Taunting melodies I keep
 lurking about going back to that place in darkened time
 where darkness played melodies
 so fine and sweet to the ears of dark
 the greatest tune breaths
 The Blood Fiery Night
with eternal flames
that do not fade nor sleep
consuming  hellish melodies
forever darkness will reap

Reviews

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

The wording was done quite well.

[DarkAngel]

"forever darkness will reap" so very true

[Lily Mae]

Intense, dark, and perfect.. :) xx

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that's a devilishly dark poem..something oozes sensuality though...lovely use of descriptive verse

[sarah]

Wow this is a captivating write! nice flow and use of words. Great job!

[Don Shaw]

Wow "consuming hellish melodies forever darkness will reap" i love that. A great piece of work here.

[Amila Jay]

Nice choice of words there, great poem:)

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Laughter plays sweet music..........forever darkness will reap.......dark and lovely

[DamienHino]

this is the most beautiful dark poem i've read. Great choice of words. and i like the repetition of "melodies" in this.

[Jibey]

Pleasure in pain...sweet darkness and hellish pleasures... a release from the normality of convention into the fine intensity of the bruising deeds of the night