Time

Each moment moves fast
present day does not last
full of tainted pride
glorious rays shed no light
at the break of dawn
The will is weakened
for darkness stands ahead

Evening soon falls
upon bloody swords of violent vengence
my shield falls
broken and bruised
and the day is done

The battle of defeat
a cursed memory forever to last
a new day will arise
through the corridors of wicked time
demons of the dark hand
rose above as they wander over our will
which fell fast to rest
as the dark stood still

Reviews

[Meghan]

I really like your style! It's a lot darker then my own which I love! Keep up the good work!

[stars are far]

this was so nice
i loved your style great work :)

[joshua deathdealer]

Wow nicely done. Love the sword and shield imagery as well as the pic..xx

[J Todd Underhill]

After 23 reviews what can I tell you that you have not already heard about this poem. I liked the read, and it was well constructed. I see I am not alone in admiring your work!

[~*. Jade Black .*~]

Beauty is not missing from this poem a dark yet glorious way to put into words something that you feel.

[Sleepless]

awesome agree dark but beautiful nice :)!!!

[MissAngelica]

so beautifully written! such truth in your words. I have yet to find a work of yours that i am not captivated by! :)

[rose with love]

shines with an unbelievable strong dark light. what could I say other than brilliant!

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

I'm enjoying these dark writes of yours. this is especially dark and beautiful. wonderfully penned. great write!