Transformed

Angel of darkness
fill me with your breath
take me on flight
to the lands of pure death

Vengence seeps from my veins
haunting echos scream
from my darkened lips
that bite with posion to tame

Your beating hearts will know my name
crying out to the light
but forever gone from your sight

For the angel of darkness
gave me breath
and sinister wings
that have captured your will

Taken to deaths darkest hell
your voices deaf to my ears
I smile with corrupt dust
engaging in tormented wrath

Reviews

[Branch Isole]

Dark on dark; interesting.

[DarkAngel]

I love poems that can call to my darkest side... this defiantly does that! I love it!!!!!!

[Thea]

"Vengence seeps from my veins
haunting echos scream"
Wow...This is really dark....Love it...Great choice of words... :)))

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Love the dark tone,captured so well...

[stars are far]

nice one :)

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

Dark and well written!

[J Todd Underhill]

The darkest write I have read from you yet, I can tell some thought went into this piece, and that I enjoyed most. being a fan of EAP I can say you are improving.

[Yari Garcia (Older Prof..]

Very dark and intriguing.

[Enigma]

Superb. Dark and skillfully written. The images invoke a feeling of dread and doom. Well penned.