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Angel of darkness
fill me with your breath
take me on flight
to the lands of pure death

Vengence seeps from my veins
haunting echos scream
from my darkened lips
that bite with posion to tame

Your beating hearts will know my name
crying out to the light
but forever gone from your sight

For the angel of darkness
gave me breath
and sinister wings
that have captured your will

Taken to deaths darkest hell
your voices deaf to my ears
I smile with corrupt dust
engaging in tormented wrath

Reviews

[FallenWingz]

love the dark side of this poem....great write....

[Amila Jay]

Very effective and dark. I like the words and tone of the poem:)

[Coyote Poetry]

Angel and death always confuse me. Death would be a Angel with a hard job. I like the directness of this poem.
"Your beating hearts will know my name
crying out to the light
but forever gone from your sight"
Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Daytonight]

A very dark poem but well written. Keep on penning.

[Raven Starhawk]

Though there is a dark flavor to this that makes my mouth water I am more enticed by the silken flow you so graciously master line after line.

[Audrey Howitt]

Dark and captivating!

[Don Shaw]

A good write. Dark. Well done.

[lawrence bear]

An excellent piece, dark n captivating.

[rwar ish me]

very dark, A nice choice.
Very good piece
~Amai